Trigger warning : 18+
I wish to write a story involving the insta user Aishwarya Sharma. If you don't know her. Please check her out. She is seriously the cutest. Now I have a plot in mind for this story.....but no experience in making the fakes. Can someone help me make the fakes while I write the story?
Anyways here's a sample of my writing:
"Mom make her do it. She always just sits around doing nothing. You know I hate the rain." No answer from mom aside from just "go quickly"
I walked up the earthern coloured stairs covered with small droplets of rain coming from the window. Through the metal bar i reached for the window handle and looked outside. Out in this crazy downpour. I saw her for the first time.
She wore a floral embroidered dress and and danced in the rain with two other kids who were trying to pull her inside. I had never seen her before around here. I heard mom screaming at me to close the window quickly and I did just that.
I sat down my mind constantly wandering around her pearl white teeth and crystal clear skin. She looked like an angel. Cliche I know. But she did. I wanted to- No I absolutely had to look at her again.
"I will go check on the scooter mom" I said while getting up and heading towards the door.
"I covered the scooter already" said my lazy ass sister while continuing to reading the book.
"I will check up on the shoes"
"All up there on your right"
"I will just go and check outside why do you have to be such a smartass"
"You were the one who didn't like the rain. Why go outside right now?"
I didn't reply and just headed outside. Trying to step calmly but my excitement definitely made me almost run while not flailing my arms.
By the time i reached there. No one was there. Just me and the downpour. The door to all the houses around closed. Even the clouds mocked me by lightning and halting their rain by the time i made my way back to my house.
"Hmm everything checks out?" My sister reading the book on the porch right now told me as i entered the lawn drenching.
"Shut up" I said and made my way towards the door.
"Uh uh.... Back entrance no getting the front entrance wet brother dear...."
With sister like her who needs an enemy. I thought to myself while dropping my head in anger and disappointment while going backwards.
"Aishuuu..... Her name is aishu. She is from Jammu and is visiting Vanita aunty" She said in a high tone and my eyes widen in suprise and excitement but with a restrained tone i enquired
"How do you know i went to the back?"
"Out..."
"Out? What is that?"
"Out of your league. She is out of your league don't waste your time and don't waste my time either. Out of my sight"
I flicked wet drops from my hand towards her book and before she can get angry i ran towards the back. Excitement back in my step. My mind dreaming all over and my eyes being the medium of it.
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Tell me if you like it.
If you don't like it. Provide constructive criticism.
I wish to write a story involving the insta user Aishwarya Sharma. If you don't know her. Please check her out. She is seriously the cutest. Now I have a plot in mind for this story.....but no experience in making the fakes. Can someone help me make the fakes while I write the story?
Anyways here's a sample of my writing:
"Mom make her do it. She always just sits around doing nothing. You know I hate the rain." No answer from mom aside from just "go quickly"
I walked up the earthern coloured stairs covered with small droplets of rain coming from the window. Through the metal bar i reached for the window handle and looked outside. Out in this crazy downpour. I saw her for the first time.
She wore a floral embroidered dress and and danced in the rain with two other kids who were trying to pull her inside. I had never seen her before around here. I heard mom screaming at me to close the window quickly and I did just that.
I sat down my mind constantly wandering around her pearl white teeth and crystal clear skin. She looked like an angel. Cliche I know. But she did. I wanted to- No I absolutely had to look at her again.
"I will go check on the scooter mom" I said while getting up and heading towards the door.
"I covered the scooter already" said my lazy ass sister while continuing to reading the book.
"I will check up on the shoes"
"All up there on your right"
"I will just go and check outside why do you have to be such a smartass"
"You were the one who didn't like the rain. Why go outside right now?"
I didn't reply and just headed outside. Trying to step calmly but my excitement definitely made me almost run while not flailing my arms.
By the time i reached there. No one was there. Just me and the downpour. The door to all the houses around closed. Even the clouds mocked me by lightning and halting their rain by the time i made my way back to my house.
"Hmm everything checks out?" My sister reading the book on the porch right now told me as i entered the lawn drenching.
"Shut up" I said and made my way towards the door.
"Uh uh.... Back entrance no getting the front entrance wet brother dear...."
With sister like her who needs an enemy. I thought to myself while dropping my head in anger and disappointment while going backwards.
"Aishuuu..... Her name is aishu. She is from Jammu and is visiting Vanita aunty" She said in a high tone and my eyes widen in suprise and excitement but with a restrained tone i enquired
"How do you know i went to the back?"
"Out..."
"Out? What is that?"
"Out of your league. She is out of your league don't waste your time and don't waste my time either. Out of my sight"
I flicked wet drops from my hand towards her book and before she can get angry i ran towards the back. Excitement back in my step. My mind dreaming all over and my eyes being the medium of it.
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Tell me if you like it.
If you don't like it. Provide constructive criticism.
