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I will try to help you for pics messege meBhai...i prefer writing..and do not have any such pics.....
I dont know...if i use pics of others....
They might allow or might feel bad...?
If anyone can help me on that....i would add pics...without any issue....
Thanks
(बस किरदारों के मुह से गलियां नही, जैसे टप्पू ने सोनू के बाप कोड़े दिया. थोडा रियल सा लगे चीजे .)let me know ur feedback guysssss...
I think that is one of the differences in TV serial and Web Series....(बस किरदारों के मुह से गलियां नही, जैसे टप्पू ने सोनू के बाप कोड़े दिया. थोडा रियल सा लगे चीजे .)
Sure...will keep that in mind....But SD is actually helping the readers to view the actual scenario and situation......so readers just dont read it..but visualize it too....I know yeh long details wali story hai but muje lagta hai story mein SD seh jada dialogue characters ke hone chaiye . And apki writing style bahut achhi hai nice start congratulations ?.
Awesome bhai#Episode-01
10 february 2015....
Sun raising and here comes the voice.....
“Good morninnnnnng Gokuldhaammm”
Subah 11 baje:
SUTRADHAAR...”Tappu jo ki abhi 15-16 saal ka hai....bas abhi abhi half pant se full pant hua hai....apne room main apne bed per lete lete...apne mobile se call karke baat kar raha hai....”
Tappu : Hello.......Sonu...kaisi hai??
Sonu: Tappu...Theek hoon (feeling sad)
Tappu: per teri awaaz se to nahin lag raha...?
Sonu: hmmmmm...thodi pareshaan hoon yaar.....
Tappu: kyon kya huaa.....bhide sir ne phir se apne zamaane ki baatein suna kar bore kiya kyaa??
Sonu: Tappu...Bakwaas mat kar yaar....
Tappu:...to kya baat hai meri jaan....itna dukhi kyon lag rahi hai.....tere periods to start nahin ho gaye???
SD : Frndss....for your information.......Tappu and sonu ki dosti ab dosti se kuch aage badh chuki hai.....dono ki badhti hui umr ke saath....aur dono ab sirf dost nahi rahe ..
Badhti umr ki needs ko pura karne ke liye ek dusre ke kaam aane lag gaye hain ye dono....
Arrey Arrey....ruko zara....Sabar karoo..
Hint diya nahin ki chala gaya dimaag chudaai per.....
kya yaar....bilkul bhi patience nahin hai tum logon main....
Zaroorat puri karne main aur Chudaai karne main bahut farak hota hai yaar...
ab tum log ye puchhoge ki zaroorat puri ki....baaki kaamkiye....to choda kyon nahin??
To uske peeche bhi ek lambi kahaani hai...Deepikaa Padukone se bhi lambi....
Sunoge???
Chalo...To chalte hain aaj se 6 mahine pehle.....
School ki building.....sab log class main...per 2 bachhe jinki umr 15-14 saal...School building ke terrace per bane ek store room main....apni nayi aur machalti jawaani ke emotions ke bahaav main...ek dusre ki baaahon main ....ek dusre ke jimson ko mehsoos karte hue.....pehli baar apne hothon ko ek dusre ke paas laakar.....darte darte kiss kar rahe they...
Aur ye kyaaa???
ye toooo...apne Sonu aur Tappu hain...
Ek dusre ke hothon ko pehli baar chuste hue....ek dusre ki saansoon ko mehsoos karte hue...jawaani ke josh main apne jawaan tappu ka haath....sonu ki chiku jaise choti choti chuchiyon per gaya.....
Aur sonu ne bhi apne chuchon per pehli baar hui is pakad ko bahut khushi se kabool kiyaa aur us pal ke maza lene lag gayi....
Tappu dabata raha aur sonu dabwaati rahi ...halki halki siskiyaan bharte hue....
Magar jab tappu ne aur age badhte hue...Sonu ki school shirt ke upper ke 3 button khol kar apna 1 haath uski shirt ke andar daalna chaha ..
tab sonu ne jaldi se uske haath ke upper apna haath rakh kar tappu ko wahin rok diya....
Aur tappu ne sonu ki aankhon main aankhein daal kar dekha....aur pucha...
Tappu: kya hua sonu..? Tujhe acha nahin lag raha kyaa??
Sonu: Nahin tappu..wo baat nahin hai..magar......
Tappu: Magar kya Sonu.....? (Tappu ne apna haath peeche kheench kar badi sharaafat se bola)
Sonu: Tappu...maza to mujhe bhi bahut aa raha hai.....per hum abhi bahut chote hain.....aur humko ye sab nahin karna chahiye....
Tappu chupchaap uski baat sunane laga...aur udaas sa hone laga.....uski shakal se pata chal raha hai...ki uske mood ki maa chud gayi hai...
Sonu usko udaas dekh kar...uska haath pakad kar bolti hai...
Sonu:...Tappu..main jaanti hooon ki tum mujhse kitna pyaar karte ho.....per tum jaante ho naa ki baba ko tum bilkul pasand nahin.....
Tappu whispers: Behen ka lund.....
Sonu: Maine sunn liya tappu...(but she don’t react.....)
Tappu (thoda frustrate ho kar): To iska matlab hum logon ki shaadi kabhi nahin hogi sonu?
Sonu..tu jaanti hai naa....tappu sonu ke bina nahin reh sakta...aur shaadi karega to sirf sonu se..
Sonu: (Tappu ka haath apne dono haath main zor se dabaate hue)...Sonu bhi tappu ke bina nahin reh sakti....aur hum log shaadi zaroor karenge tappu....(bolte bolte sonu ek haath se tappu ke gaal ko pyaar se sehlaane lagi)..
Tappu: Magar kaise sonu....Bhide behenchod nahin maanega..(Remember friends..its a Web Series now)
Sonu: isiliye to tappu...humko pehle apni padhaai puri karni hogi....aur kuch banana padega....aur 1 baar hum kuch ban gaye to phir baba mane ya naa maanein... per hum shaadi jarur karenge....
Tappu(jhalla kar):Per sonu..tab tak kya ..?? Tappu kaise khud ko roke.....apni sonu ko pyaar karne se...(wo uska haath apne dono haath main pakad kar bolta hai)
Sonu: Tappu...main bhi chahti hoon ki tum sonu ko pyaar karo....Sonu tappu ko pyaar kare..magar...(wo bhi pareshaan hoti hui)
Sonu: tappu...tu janta hai na ki Sonu tappu se kitna pyaar karti hai....
Tappu apna sir jhuka kar baitha......aur sunn raha hai chupchap..
Sonu: per main apne aayi baba se bhi to utna hi pyaar karti hoon naa....agar hum kuch ulta seedha karenge..to kya hogaa unk logon kaa???
Tappu sonu ki taraf dekhta hai with confused face.....
Tappu: matlab....??
Sonu: Arrey...matlab.....agar kuch gadbad ho gayi to...???
Tappu (still confused): Gadbad....kaisi gadbad sonu?
Sonu: Arrey budhhu....kuch ho gaya to???
Aur Sonu apne dono haath se apne pait ke upper circle banaati hai....jaisa bada pait pregnant aurton ka hota hai....
SD : Uske 2-3 baar aisa ishara karne se...tappu samajh jata hai.....
Aur zor se hansne lag jata hai....
Sonu: tappu..hans kyon raha hai?? Maine koi joke mara kyaa???
Tappu (laughing slowly): Arrey...tu pagal to nahin hai kya sonu? (laughing)
Aise kiss karne se...aur chuchi dabaane se koi maa thode ban jaati hai...(still laughing..)
Sonu: Haan..haan wo mujhe pata hai.....Bio main top kiya tha maine last year....
Tappu (hanste hue): Phir.....?
Sonu: arrey...magar uska start to pehle kiss se hi to hota hai naa...
Tappu: kiss se....??? wo kaise??
Sonu: Arrey buddhu Tappu ji maharaj.....Pehle ladka ladki kiss karte hain....phir oral karte hain....aur phir.....
Aur Sonu apne ulte haath ki mutthi bana kar usmain apne seedhe haath ki ungli ghusaati hai..nikaalti hai...ghusaati hai..nikaalti hai....
Sonu: Aur phir ladki (phir se pait per pregnancy wala gola banaati hai)
Tappu : to ye wo baat thi jiske kaaran tu tappu ko rok rahi thi?
Sonu : Haannnnnnnn..aur kyaaa..
Tappu : Aur agar Tappu promise kare...ki aisa kuch nahin hogaa... to??
SD : Phir tappu bhi apne ulte haath ki mutthi bana kar usmain apne seedhe haath ki ungli ghusaata hai..nikaalta hai...ghusaata hai..nikaalta hai...
Sonu : Tappu...tu janta hai naa....ye possible nahin hota...wo...wo 8th class ki shivani aur Rahul .....yaad hain naa...Rahul kaise khush ho ho kar tujhe batata thaa...ki aaj shivani ko lip kiss kiya....aaj ye kiya..aaj wo kiyaa....
Sonu : aur ab dekh...shivani ho gayi na pait se...aur to aur school walon ne bhi dono ki nikaal diya school se....Bechaaare pata nahin kahan honge...kya karenge..???(udaas sonu)
Tappu : Sonu...unko maa chudaane de naa....tu apni baat kar....Tujhe yahi darr hai naa...ki hum kiss karenge...aur aage badhenge..to jarur kuch gadbad ho jaayegi...aur wo sab tere aayi baba bardaasht nahin kar pakenge.....hai naa???
Sonu : Haaaan....
Tappu: (kuch soch kar bolta hai)....Ideaaaaaa..
Sonu : kyaaaaaa?
Tappu (with excitement): Dekh Sonu....to tu jaanti hai naa...Tappu duniya mian sabbbbbbse jyada kis se pyaar karta hai....?
Sonu (soch kar): mmmmmmmmmm...apne dadaji se....?
Tappu: righttttt...Tappu apne dadaji ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai.....hai naa....
Sonu : Haaaann..wo to main jaanti hoon ....phir?
Tappu: to meri pyaari Sonu...Agar hum wo karein hi nahin...jis se kuch gadbad ho jaayegi....too????
Sonu: Tu rehne de Tappu....maine bola naa aise control karna kisi ke bass ki baat nahin hoti.....
Aur Sonu pareshaan ho kar apna haath apne sir per rakh kar aur sir neeche jhuka kar baith jaati hai...
Sonu ki aisi baat sunn kar...Tappu gusse main jhatt se khada ho jata hai.....
Tappu: Sonu......tu tappu ko challenge mat kar....
Sonu soch main padd jaati hai ki Tappu ko achaanak se kya ho gayaa.....
Aur Tappu......apna seedha haath hawa main uthaa kar.......bolta hai....
"Tappu Champaklal Jethalal Gada aaj apne Dadaji ki kasam khaata hai....ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaaaye...Tappu wo kaam kabhi nahin karega....jis se Sonu ..uske aayi baba ...Tappu ke papa mummy ..aur....Tappu ke dadaji ....kisi per bhi... kabhi koi ungli naa uthaa sake...."
SD : Tappu ye baat ek shapath ke jaise bolta hai.....bahut confidence ke saath.....aur uski aankhoon main itni chamak dekh kar...Sonu ki aankhoon main bhi chamak aa jati hai....khush ho jaati hai..aur zor se tappu ke gale lag jaati hai.....
Sonu : Tapppuuuuuuuuu......
Tappu : Sonuuuu.....
SD : phir Tappu miyaan apni sonu ka gol chehra apne dono haathon ke beech main pakadkar....uski aankhoon main aankhein daal kar bolte hainnn.......
Tappu : I LOVE YOUUUUU...Sonu
Sonu : Ohh Tappu......I LOVE U TOOOOO....
SD : Aur ye 3 magic words sunte hi...Tappu ke hoonth..uski jaan Sonu ke hoothon paas apne aap aa jaate hain...aur wo pehle se bhi jyada ache se sonu ke lips ko chusna shuru kar deta hai...
Sonu bhi ab Tappu ke hothon se milne wali har harkat ka maza le rahi thi....
Aur....kuch hi dair main....dono ki jeebhein bhi aapas mai takrane lagi..aur dono puri besharmi se...apni thookh se bhari jeebh ek dusre ko dene aur lene lag gaye....
AAj unki aisi lip kiss ka pehla din thaa...magar unko dekh kar lag raha tha....jaise ye log saaloon se ye sab karte aa rahe hainnn....
Manana padega....dono born talented bache hainn...
Jahaan Sonu ke haath Tappu ke sir ke peeche ..uske silky baalon main ghoom kar tappu ko mast kar rahe they....wahin Tappu ke chote chote haath.....Sonu ke school skirt ke upper se...uski 32 size ki gaand ko dabaa rahe they......
Tappu gaand to utne ache se nahin daba paa raha thaa.....magar gaand badaane se..Sonu ka pura jism tappu ke upper dab raha thaa.....
Sonu ki chut ...tappu ke lund se takraaa rahi thi......aisa lag raha thaa...ki wo dono bhi aapas main ek dusre ko kiss kar rahe hain...kapdon ke andar se....
Aur lijiye..wo ghadi aa hi gayi......
Tappu ne apna right hand.....sonu ke shirt ke andar dheere dheere khiskaa hi diyaa.....Sonu ko kiss karte karte.....
Aur Sonu ne bhi.....kiss per hi dhyaan diyaaa...aur tappu ko wp sab karne diya .jo wo kar raha thaaa...Yaani uske 34B chikuchuchi ki maalish...
Us din to school ki ghanti baj gayi...aur tappu bas sonu ki dono chuchiyoon ki baari baari se maalish hi kar paya....
Magar...aap to jaante hain......ye wo aag hai....jo ek baar lag jaaye to phir baar baar lagti hi rehti hai....aur har baar pehle se jyada tez..
Tappu aur Sonu bhi is aag main bahut baar jale...bahut baar bujhe....
Magar hamaare Tappu ne kabhi apne dadaji ki kasam nahin todi....
Matlab......
Arrey bhai..matlab ye...Ki Bhide Khandaan ki 15 saal ki jawaani aur Gada Khandaan ke 15 saal ke joshile jawaan ne sab kuch kar liya....per....wo nahin kiya.....
Wo...matlab..Chudaayi nahin ki....bas..ab khush...?
To aaiye ab waapas chalte hain...... 10 February 2015 ko....
Sun raising and here comes the voice.....
“Good morninnnnnng Gokuldhaammm”
End of #Episode-01
Nah bro aur gandi gandi galiyan honi chahiye(बस किरदारों के मुह से गलियां नही, जैसे टप्पू ने सोनू के बाप कोड़े दिया. थोडा रियल सा लगे चीजे .)
well....try to use it as they suits....neither too formal..neither too vulgar...Nah bro aur gandi gandi galiyan honi chahiye
. Jitni gandi gali utna jyada maja. Randi chhinal behen ke lode aisi saari galiya aur jyada stimulate karti hai story ke sexyness ko
ANGOORI BHABHI ( SHUBHANGI ATRE ) PE EK INCEST STORY HINDI FOUNT ME BANAOHEY Frndsssss...
I love to share my hot thoughts as stories from the most sexy and famous TV serial ...
Just suggest me....Should i write ...
a) short stories with less details...
b) mid size stories with some details....
c) Long stories with each and every detail....
comment fast...so i can start.....
Mee to want on her Shubhangi atre aka angoori bhabi either with TMT or David Chacha..plzzANGOORI BHABHI ( SHUBHANGI ATRE ) PE EK INCEST STORY HINDI FOUNT ME BANAO
THEAM - SASUR BAHU KI SUHAGRAT
Make all gents one by one with all mahila mandal one by one including tapu sena and champakBro please make tapu with other tmkoc women in upcoming parts of the series